تاثیر نظرات اصلاحی و نظرات اشاره ای معلم بر مهارت نوشتن زبان آموزان ایرانی

Subject Areas : آموزش زبان انگلیسی

مهرنوش عطاآفرین ¹ , وصال آیات ² , علی اصغر یوسفی آذرفام ³

1 - گروه زبان انگلیسی، واحد آیت ا...آملی، دانشگاه آزاد اسلامی، آمل، ایران
2 - گروه آموزش زبان انگلیسی، دانشگاه علامه طباطبائی، تهران ، ایران
3 - English Language Department, Soufian Branch, Islamic Azad University, Soufian, Iran

Received: 2022-03-09 Accepted : 2022-03-09 Published : 2022-04-01

Keywords: مهارت نوشتن, اصلاحی, اشاره ای, نظرات معلم,

Abstract :

هدف از این تحقیق بررسی تأثیر نظرات اصلاحی معلم و نظرات اشاره ای معلم بر توانایی نوشتن زبان آموزان EFL در سطح متوسط بود. برای انتخاب  شرکت کنندگان این تحقیق، 40 زبان آموز EFL در سطح قبل از میانی، از آزمون Quick Placement Test استفاده شد. سپس شرکت کنندگان به طور تصادفی در دو گروه آزمایش و کنترل قرار گرفتند. قبل از آزمایش، به شرکت کنندگان هر دو گروه پیش آزمون داده شد تا به توانایی نوشتن اولیه شان پی برده شود. پس از ارائه نظرات اشاره ای به گروه آزمایش و نظرات اصلاحی برای گروه کنترل، یک پس آزمون برای یافتن تأثیر دو نوع ابزار اجرا شد. برای بررسی اینکه آیا روش جدید موثر است، از آزمون t-test مستقل استفاده شد. برای تعیین میزان پیشرفت بین پیش آزمون و پس آزمون از گروه آزمایش، از آزمون t-test زوجی استفاده شد. نتایج مطالعه نشان داد که نظرات اشاره ای معلم توانایی نوشتن دانش آموزان را بهبود می بخشد. بدین ترتیب، مربیان می توانند از نظرات اشاره ای برای کمک به زبان آموزان برای بهبود توانایی نوشتن استفاده کنند.

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