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        1 - Two Collaborative Feedback Models in EFL Writing Instruction: Do They Make a Difference?
        میترا ربیعی
        Research in L1 writing has found numerous benefits of employing collaborative learning in the classroom. The research findings on group work provide clear evidence that engaging learners in group activities increases opportunities for students to engage in the negotiati أکثر
        Research in L1 writing has found numerous benefits of employing collaborative learning in the classroom. The research findings on group work provide clear evidence that engaging learners in group activities increases opportunities for students to engage in the negotiation of meaning, which further leads to better acquisition. The present study, implementing two different collaborative feedback models, based on various sources and modes of feedback, examines the effect of each on the students’ writing quality. Sixty Iranian students, majoring in English Translation, were assigned into three homogeneous groups based on their obtained scores on Oxford Placement Test (OPT) and sample paragraph writing. They covered five topics in a sequence of ten written texts − before and after receiving feedback − over a 15-week semester. The results revealed that students incorporated both the teacher’s and peers’ oral/written comments in the process of draft editing, and that they benefited from the two collaborative feedback models almost equally. The interview results also confirmed co-operative learning as an effective teaching strategy that could be used to enhance achievement and socialization among students and to improve attitudes towards learning and working in groups, especially in EFL settings. تفاصيل المقالة
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        2 - Iranian EFL Learners’ Reactions to Different Feedbacks in Writing Classrooms: Teacher Written Comments (TWC) vs. Peer Written Comments (PWC)
        میترا ربیعی
        The teaching of writing has recently begun to move away from a concentration on the written product to an emphasis on the process of writing. Feedback is a fundamental element of the process approach to writing. It can be defined as input from a reader to a writer with أکثر
        The teaching of writing has recently begun to move away from a concentration on the written product to an emphasis on the process of writing. Feedback is a fundamental element of the process approach to writing. It can be defined as input from a reader to a writer with the effect of providing information to the writer for a revision. This study reports on the effectiveness of two types of feedback provided by two different sources– the teacher and the peers– on students’ overall writing quality in an EFL context. To fulfill such an aim, a group of 60 Iranian Persian native speakers aged between 22 and 25 majoring in English Translation were chosen from among a greater population of 98. They were assigned to three homogeneous groups based on their scores on Oxford Placement Test (OPT) and a sample writing assignment on a given topic by emphasizing the expository genre through providing some reasons. They covered five topics before and after receiving feedback– ten written texts– in the span of a 15-week semester. Then, the papers were rated analytically. The findings revealed that feedback had a noticeable effect on the students’ draft editing, and of the two sources of feedback, the students benefited from teacher’s feedback more than their peers’ feedback. Other possible implications interpreted from this study supported the occurrence of a change in students’ roles in communicative foreign language learning settings and that, they could take the role of autonomous learners and turn into common respondents to other students’ writings and in this way their L2 knowledge construction and implementation increased تفاصيل المقالة
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        3 - پیش‌بینی انگیزش تحصیلی دانش‌آموزان براساس نوع بازخورد معلم با در نظر گرفتن نقش میانجی ذهنیت دانش‌آموزان
        طلعت سادات صباغ حسن زاده سید کاظم شادمند
        هدف پژوهش حاضر پیش‌بینی انگیزش تحصیلی دانش‌آموزان بر اساس بازخورد معلمان با در نظر گرفتن نقش میانجی نوع ذهنیت آنها بود. تحقیق از لحاظ هدف کاربردی و از حیث اجرا توصیفی-همبستگی از نوع مدل معادلات ساختاری بود. جامعه آماری دانش‌آموزان دختر متوسطه اول مشهد که به روش خوشه‌ای أکثر
        هدف پژوهش حاضر پیش‌بینی انگیزش تحصیلی دانش‌آموزان بر اساس بازخورد معلمان با در نظر گرفتن نقش میانجی نوع ذهنیت آنها بود. تحقیق از لحاظ هدف کاربردی و از حیث اجرا توصیفی-همبستگی از نوع مدل معادلات ساختاری بود. جامعه آماری دانش‌آموزان دختر متوسطه اول مشهد که به روش خوشه‌ای چند مرحله‌ای و با استفاده از جدول مورگان تعداد 380 نفر بعنوان نمونه انتخاب شدند. ابزار گرردآوری داده‌ها پرسشنامه محقق ساخته ارزیابی بازخورد معلم مبتنی بر مدل باتلر و وین و مطالعات فرار و همکاران، پرسشنامه ذهنیت دانش‌آموزان کاتامیسو و لو و پرسشنامه انگیزش تحصیلی هارتر بود. برای تحلیل داده‌ها از نرم‌افزارهای SPSSv16 و AMOSv24 استفاده شد. نتایج نشان داد بازخورد تلاش‌ محور و توانایی محور هر دو هم به صورت مستقیم و هم از طریق میانجی‌گری ذهنیت دانش‌آموزان می‌تواند انگیزش تحصیلی را پیش‌بینی کند. همچنین نتایج نشان داد ذهنیت رشدپذیر و ایستا نیز به طور مستقیم با انگیزش تحصیلی ارتباط دارد. وقتی معلمان دانش‌آموزان را افرادی پرتلاش می دانند و این نگرش را در قالب بازخورد به آنها ارائه می‌دهند، بر ذهنیت شان تأثیر گذاشته و در نتیجه با ایجاد یک ذهنیت رشدپذیر در مورد توانایی‌ها و احساسات موجب انگیزش تحصیلی بیشتر در آنها می‌شوند. تفاصيل المقالة
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        4 - Peer Online Feedback and Teacher Online Feedback on Iranian Writing Performance
        Mohammad Azizi Reza Shams Narges Tavassoli
        This study aimed to investigate the effectiveness of using online peer and teacher feedback on Iranian EFL learners writing performance. To this end, a group of 28 homogenous learners were selected to participate in this study. They were divided into two equal sets; the أکثر
        This study aimed to investigate the effectiveness of using online peer and teacher feedback on Iranian EFL learners writing performance. To this end, a group of 28 homogenous learners were selected to participate in this study. They were divided into two equal sets; the first group received online peer feedback and the second group received online teacher feedback. In order to obtain the results of the treatments, two types of t-tests were run. First, to check the effectiveness of the two types of online feedback, paired sample t-tests and to make the comparison between the TF and PF independent sample t-test was run. Results of the study indicated that both types of online corrective feedback are effective. However, the TF group outperformed the PF one. Therefore, technology integration in L2 classrooms and, more specifically, providing learners with online corrective feedback will lead to more progress in EFL learners' writing performance. تفاصيل المقالة
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        5 - The Effect of Writing Feedback Techniques and Students’ Writing Anxiety on Students’ Essay Writing Ability
        Annisa Astrid Dwi Rukmini Ahmad Sofwan Sri Fitriati
        The Research was aimed at finding out the effects of the implementation of writing feedback techniques and students’ writing anxiety on students’ writing ablity. Experimental method of 3x2 factorial design was employed in the research. There were three exper أکثر
        The Research was aimed at finding out the effects of the implementation of writing feedback techniques and students’ writing anxiety on students’ writing ablity. Experimental method of 3x2 factorial design was employed in the research. There were three experimental groups of students who were taught by using teacher feedback, peer feedback and the combination of peer and teacher feedback writing technique. Prior the treatment, each student was asked to do an expository essay writing test in order to get the writing scores and to fill SLWAI (Second Language Writing Anxiety Inventory) to classify them into low and high writing anxiety students. Then, the students were taught on how to produce expository essay writing. At the end of the meeting, the students were asked to compose an expository essay as the posttest. The data were analyzed by using paired t-test, two-way ANOVA and Post Hoc test. From the results of data analysis it could be inferred that the implementation of writing feedback techniques affected students’ writing ability and the effects depended on the degree of students’ writing anxiety. تفاصيل المقالة
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        6 - The Relationship between EFL Students’ Writing Motivation, Self-Perceived Writing Intelligence, and Attitude toward Written Feedback
        Shaghayegh Hosseini Mohseni Sadabadi Ahmad Mohseni
        The study of individual difference variables in the realm of written feedback is one of the significant lines of research which has been reinvigorated in the last few years. These variables are believed to affect both students’ engagement with feedback and their w أکثر
        The study of individual difference variables in the realm of written feedback is one of the significant lines of research which has been reinvigorated in the last few years. These variables are believed to affect both students’ engagement with feedback and their writing improvement. The present correlational study investi- gated the relationship between EFL students’ implicit theories of writing intelligence, writing motivation and attitudes toward written feedback. In so doing, 110 intermediate English language learners took three questionnaires, namely Implicit Theories of Writing Intelligence, Orientation toward Corrective Feedback, and Writing Motivation. The findings of the present study indicated that EFL students’ incremental theory of writing intelligence positively correlated with their writing motivation and feedback seeking orientation. On the other hand, EFL students’ entity theory of writing intelligence negatively correlated with their writ- ing motivation and positively correlated with their feedback avoiding orientation. In other words, those EFL learners who believed in the plasticity of their cognitive abilities were of higher writing motivation and feedback seeking orientation levels than those participants who believed that their writing ability was a fixed entity, which could not be extended. تفاصيل المقالة